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Drip Drip Drip
Contributed by
ShaeBay
on
Thursday, 26th April 2012 @ 02:28:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Lurking in walls, behind every corner
Unnoticeable to the human eye
Leaping through dreams and tormenting..
Tormenting her in her sleep
Strangling her, no screams are heard.
She runs,
faster
Faster.
FASTER!
There is no escape!
Tossing and turning
Trying to awaken
The earth around her trembles
Knowing she is stuck
No sympathy is given
Hiding as the tears fall down
Shaking, knowing her end is near.
The matter approaches her, Lunging!
A scream. An ear shattering scream.
The silence is beautiful.
Except for the
Drip
Drip
Drip
Hanging in the room
Copyright ©
ShaeBay
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2012-04-26 14:28:53]
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Re: Drip Drip Drip
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by deusdeira on
Thursday, 26th April 2012 @ 05:53:02 PM AEST
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| Drip Drip Drip, such a peaceful sound. |
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Re: Drip Drip Drip
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by Breezy on
Thursday, 26th April 2012 @ 09:56:41 PM AEST
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Well....how decidedly sinister and disturbing
is this? Wonderfully evoking and provocative.
When you can conjure emotion like this from
thin air with just paper and pen, you have done
well.
Thanks for the chill.
~ Breezy
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Re: Drip Drip Drip
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by LilDrifter on
Friday, 27th April 2012 @ 08:16:26 AM AEST
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| Very intense, a great piece. It had my attention from the start and carried me through to the end !! |
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Re: Drip Drip Drip
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by justem on
Friday, 27th April 2012 @ 09:01:13 AM AEST
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| haunting. reminds me of a nightmare i had. chilled to the bone. Enjoyed your poem...didnt enjoy my nightmare! thanks |
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Re: Drip Drip Drip
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by thehotshotpoet on
Friday, 27th April 2012 @ 02:12:20 PM AEST
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very awesome write thanks for sharing
the hot shot poet |
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Re: Drip Drip Drip
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th April 2012 @ 07:48:23 PM AEST
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The matter approaches her, Lunging! Eek!
This is damn scary! Talk bringing the reader into your very own nightmare! Now that is writing!!!
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Re: Drip Drip Drip
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th April 2012 @ 07:49:23 PM AEST
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| *Talk about bringing |
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