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As The Smoke Rises
Contributed by
ShaeBay
on
Wednesday, 25th April 2012 @ 11:16:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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A cloud surrounding this tiny room
The hazy look of this once lighted space
No knowledge of what's even going on.
Unfamiliar faces, smiling all around me.
Damned if I speak a word to any of these strange creatures.
Who knew such a place could hold me hostage.
Laughing over nothing at all.
What the hell is even going on?
Swirling around, head spinning as the room turns.
Bright colors and fairies tickling my toes.
The faces grow bigger mocking my every move.
I start to feel lost, scared of not knowing.
Wanting to run away, yet wanting to stay.
Running away in my mind.
To an endless light ahead.
Falling
Falling
And falling....
The brightness returns, my head clears.
It all makes sense now.
As the smoke rises.
Copyright ©
ShaeBay
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2012-04-25 11:16:20]
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Re: As The Smoke Rises
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th April 2012 @ 07:21:08 PM AEST
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Lovin' the imagery on this one.
It could be anything, it could be one thing, it could be nothing, but it seems it has so many levels to me.
Death
Stoned
Dreams
I got lost in there as this one drew me in. :)
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Re: As The Smoke Rises
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by shelby on
Thursday, 26th April 2012 @ 01:25:29 AM AEST
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I liked the title and am glad I read this. Im with Tim on this one.
I also found many layers in this, and I was kind of dreamy, up in smoke per say while reading this. All and nothing......... yet it is alot of something I LIKE!!!!!!
Michelle |
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