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Lies
Contributed by
LetYourFeelingsOut
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Monday, 23rd April 2012 @ 09:56:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Freedom and trust
Two elements of life
Essential to living
Important to love
Hold sand in your hand to tightly it falls
To loosely it slips through uncaring palms
Eyes watch with judgement
Face full of lies
You never know what people hide
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LetYourFeelingsOut
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2012-04-23 09:56:46]
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Re: Lies
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by northernlights on
Monday, 23rd April 2012 @ 01:32:27 PM AEST
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| Effective in its simplicity,powerful in its truisms,then packs a punch for the last line,well written. |
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Re: Lies
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by ShaeBay on
Wednesday, 25th April 2012 @ 09:38:15 AM AEST
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I agree. Very straight-forward. Inspiring if I must say.
Well done :)
Shae |
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Re: Lies
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by eleven7 on
Sunday, 6th May 2012 @ 06:53:52 AM AEST
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So true, well said.
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