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Untitled
Contributed by
smile92
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Monday, 23rd April 2012 @ 07:58:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Images swirling in the sky
If walls could talk then you would find
All the secrets she's sure to hide
Silent screams as worlds divide
Inside her body, heart and mind
Innocence spilling out like wine
Hush little darling, no need to cry
No one's saving you tonight
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2012-04-23 07:58:31] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by Breezy on
Monday, 23rd April 2012 @ 12:09:38 PM AEST (User
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Such a sad piece. In a few short lines
you've managed to grip the heart with
in a vice of emotion that threatens to
rip it apart. Not an easy feat. Well done,
poet.
Excellent writing!
~ Breezy
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