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sea of love letters
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 12:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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a sea of love letters from a happier time
when love was full, and life had rhyme,
where passion soared, and kisses too
each warm one longer, all accrued,
saved within' love's sweet sentiment
kept; each and every that was sent,
these love letters will not be forsook
'twas much happiness the love partook,
and one would love to do it all again
to feel the love burning lovingly within',
oh no, they weren't written all for nought
dear love that gave, love's breath besought,
these old love letters will be saved; or;
shared through poetry to another's shore,
heartfelt writes that came to an impasse'
'twas love flown by, passed now, whereas;
so instead of seeing this true love as dead
far better it be; to let love live and be read,
from deepest souls, sweet love was gave
could one throw such letters upon the waves?
some day these letters will be old memories
if they are not tossed out, within' depth of seas,
floating endlessly upon memory; alas engraved?
'twas not e'er one love letter that was misgave,
a sea of love letters from happier times
when life was full, and love shined rhymes,
where passions grew, and kisses too
each warm one longer, 'til away love flew,
saved within' love's sweetest sentiments
when heart's had purpose and love was meant,
this sea of love letters will not be forsook
'twas much happiness within', that love partook.
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Re: sea of love letters
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by me on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 12:50:02 AM AEST
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| i like... love letters, even the ones that were never sent, hold a truth that can't be erased simply because the love itself no longer exists... |
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Re: sea of love letters
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by venkat on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 03:06:58 AM AEST
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| One must have such a life time beautiful chance to swim in the great sea of love letters..I had no such chance in my life as my house goddess never allowed me to look at any other girl.. hahha. very beautiful my dear lady.. venkat |
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Re: sea of love letters
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 03:21:23 AM AEST
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| Ahh Nessa ... this is delightful ... so beautifully written ... I have a weakness for love poems with the slightly old fashioned way of writing. It is also a nice way of writing about all the love letters you must have - I could never throw mine away either - they are so precious ... hugs Jan |
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Re: sea of love letters
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by spooky on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 06:45:35 AM AEST
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| beautiflly written,,thanks for shareing this,,a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: sea of love letters
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 09:45:49 AM AEST
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Nessa I loved this,your poems are always so beautiful,Well written, & an enjoyable read!
Thanks for sharing this one! Christina |
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Re: sea of love letters
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 11:48:42 AM AEST
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| wonderful write....love poems always have a special place in my heart... :) |
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Re: sea of love letters
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by ginsdance on
Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 11:12:18 AM AEST
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This poem was enchanting! I loved it! I've been too busy to sign on lately, and I wanted to catch up on some of your work. This was great! Bravo!
Gin |
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Re: sea of love letters
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by norm on
Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 12:09:11 PM AEST
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you're as good as they come.
i should imagine, whatever you
write has got to be super...
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Re: sea of love letters
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by Wrybod on
Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 01:36:01 PM AEST
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| Nessa, after reading this lovely sentimental poem,I wish I had kept all mine. In a way I have because my memory is full of them |
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Re: sea of love letters
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by Ravi on
Sunday, 11th May 2003 @ 08:53:26 AM AEST
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| Nessa This ia beautifully written sentimental poem.I really enjoyed this. |
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Re: sea of love letters
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by Bongo on
Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 12:38:57 PM AEST
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| Yes, Life is a passing parade of joys and sorrows. This is a beautiful write and i'm inspired by your talent. |
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Re: sea of love letters
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by wazarov on
Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 02:28:04 AM AEST
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| now i got a chance to experience your poetry or should i say your beauty behind those blazing words. |
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Re: sea of love letters
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 11:41:47 PM AEST
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Oh Ness.....This is truly beautiful...I dont know how I missed this.. but I've been so busy chatting lately that I haven't read many poems here... I'm glad I read it now... it brought back so many happy memories for me...
Love your work, Grrlfriend....
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by princesspurty on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 07:49:24 PM AEST
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| this is beautiful !!! love letters are very dear to have and look back on! |
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Re: sea of love letters
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 08:09:36 PM AEST
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oh so very lovely and bittersweet, I can't believe I missed this one
Shari |
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by Kie on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 10:54:07 PM AEST
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Beautiful. A classic masterpiece that every heart could pen if hearts could write.
Beautiful with imagery and emotion as well.
Awed.......
Kie |
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by buchi on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 10:39:37 AM AEST
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| " A well made a work of art that it cannot be improved"..."poetically" touches deeply to the very soul of Man |
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