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Black out
Contributed by
Kailas
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Saturday, 21st April 2012 @ 06:04:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The darkness closes in
Creating goose bumps on my skin
Then I start to feel the fear
And let drop a single tear
I don't know what to think
It's a scary feeling
And I start to sink
Will anyone hear my helpless cries
Fearing the worst
I begin to close my eyes
(This is about my little sis who is afraid of the dark)
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Kailas
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2012-04-21 18:04:16]
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Re: Black out
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st April 2012 @ 06:25:54 PM AEST
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Is her name Ada Seiple by any chance? :p
Nothing like reassuring kid sis with a scary poem. lol Nicely done.
Take care,
Tim
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Re: Black out
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by smile92 on
Monday, 23rd April 2012 @ 08:28:37 AM AEST
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Simple but I think it describes really well the fear of darkness that children feel but I could also see it relating to other topics.
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