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Blaze
Contributed by
Kailas
on
Friday, 20th April 2012 @ 04:08:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Ashes cover things bottom to top
Raging fires
It won't stop
Everything covered in a gray mist
The earth in Fire's clutches
An inferno fist
Dust, once land
And everything grand,
Now a big ball of flame
Who's to blame?
Fire kisses each tree
Smoke fills the air
but Fire doesn't care
Her blaze is the open sea
Fire will definitely amaze
Just a beauty
A blaze
Copyright ©
Kailas
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2012-04-20 16:08:57]
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Re: Blaze
(User Rating: 1 )
by thehotshotpoet on
Friday, 20th April 2012 @ 06:08:23 PM AEST
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very nice write thanks for sharing
the hot shot poet |
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Re: Blaze
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd April 2012 @ 07:35:39 AM AEST
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I like this write very much. It's stripped, elemental and sharp poetry.
Cheers,
Mickey. |
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