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Will You Hold Me Close?
Contributed by
ShaeBay
on
Friday, 20th April 2012 @ 11:10:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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She gazes up at him with an intimate smile.
The warmth of their love wrapped around the whole room.
Bodies pressed against each other, so perfectly.
She wraps herself around his chest pleading,
Pleading with her beckoning hazel eyes.
Begging him to stay so she's not alone.
Her smile fades and she looks away.
He gathers her up in one swift motion.
Gazes at her with his loving smile.
He entwines his fingers with hers.
Gently kissing her forehead.
He makes a promise, one not to be forgotten.
That night he made the oath,
To be her only love, for this is true.
She kisses him gently and smiles.
For all she ever wanted,
Was for him to hold her close.
Always and Forever.
Copyright ©
ShaeBay
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2012-04-20 11:10:49]
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Re: Will You Hold Me Close?
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th April 2012 @ 12:18:26 PM AEST
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Beautiful.  |
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Re: Will You Hold Me Close?
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by PreciousKitten on
Friday, 20th April 2012 @ 12:34:50 PM AEST
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| i love this poem. this poem is truly sweet and awesome as ever. i love how you just give what she asks for without a word. i love it. shes very lucky. i love it again. so please keep writing. |
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Re: Will You Hold Me Close?
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by thehotshotpoet on
Friday, 20th April 2012 @ 06:23:55 PM AEST
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your words are beautiful & very inspiring to me thanks for sharing
the hot shot poet |
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Re: Will You Hold Me Close?
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 21st April 2012 @ 03:13:10 AM AEST
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| For all she ever wanted was for him to hold her close.........pivotal line in the expression of the meaning of love to a woman.when the heart is on fire then the reader cannot help but warm their hands and smile with the recognition of a pouring of the heart.Lovely writing. |
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