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perfect dream
Contributed by
thehotshotpoet
on
Friday, 20th April 2012 @ 07:24:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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if I were to lay in green pasture's
& if dream's did come true
you would be laying right beside me
& I would not be missing you
every day when I awake
you'de be laying next to me
I would hold you in my arms
& maybe you would see
you & I was no mistake
of this I'm very sure
I've never known a love so strong
or one so very pure
you've taught me about purity
& destined by the stars
you've taught me to be grateful
for simply who we are
My love could get no stronger
threw life it does unfold
It's you who makes me feel alive
with your heart that's made of gold
the hot shot poet
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2012-04-20 07:24:47]
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Re: perfect dream
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by ShaeBay on
Friday, 20th April 2012 @ 10:57:28 AM AEST
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This poem made me smile. The wording was so delightful.
Thank you for sharing
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Re: perfect dream
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by LetYourFeelingsOut on
Friday, 20th April 2012 @ 11:11:14 AM AEST
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| this is sooo sweet , i couldnt stop smiling while reading it :) Thanks for sharing !! |
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Re: perfect dream
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by Kailas on
Friday, 20th April 2012 @ 08:36:46 PM AEST
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| omg this poem is so sweet, wow all your poems are so good l luv them :P |
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Re: perfect dream
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by shelby on
Saturday, 21st April 2012 @ 12:31:56 AM AEST
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lots of warmth and smiles in this. Nice images as well.
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