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~Lost in You~ Falling for a Vampire
Contributed by
shelby
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Friday, 20th April 2012 @ 02:31:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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At times I wish I had not seen you.
It took but a second, I was addicted.
Strange vibrations following me
my eyes clouding over, couldn't see.
World spinning, shadows more beautiful.
I danced on the edge of my confusion.
Heart spun, world coming undone.
Losing controll, in seconds...
I felt you in the night, you came to me in dreams
no turning back, I knew I was lost in you.
Or were you lost in me? Searching over eternity
now here I am, we cannot resist each other.
I'm not sure, I still want to run
but my feet wont go, instead I float
float in the night, neath the moon
back to you, resting in your arms.
One kiss, one moment, eternity is ours.......
Copyright ©
shelby
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2012-04-20 02:31:12]
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Re: ~Lost in You~ Falling for a Vampire
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by emystar on
Friday, 20th April 2012 @ 04:27:06 AM AEST
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Great writing, girlfriend.
Blessings and happy floating,
emy |
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Re: ~Lost in You~ Falling for a Vampire
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by thehotshotpoet on
Friday, 20th April 2012 @ 09:53:38 AM AEST
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beautiful work thanks for sharing
the hot shot poet |
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Re: ~Lost in You~ Falling for a Vampire
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by doug on
Friday, 20th April 2012 @ 11:41:53 AM AEST
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| This has to be my favorite of the two. I saw the name Bella at the top so was wondering if this write was inspired by Twilight. Disregard my other comment... yes I do strongly dislike the glitter but other than that I did enjoy the first movie. A great ride through the enternal struggle of one smitten for gettin bitten. lol. Wow that's corny. take care , truly , Doug |
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Re: ~Lost in You~ Falling for a Vampire
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th April 2012 @ 12:21:42 PM AEST
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Re: ~Lost in You~ Falling for a Vampire
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by Rylo on
Saturday, 27th October 2012 @ 02:47:38 PM AEST
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| Oh how I have missed reading your works, especially these wonderful vampire writes. You have always been and will always be one of the best I have ever known. Great job my friend |
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