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Passing the Veil
Contributed by
alicewhite
on
Thursday, 19th April 2012 @ 06:16:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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Passing the veil
to pass or to fail
better thy self
as the
holy grail
I am the God head
33 stars shine brightly above my head
as many shine over you
but only as many
as you allow to
dont think to hard
just sit in that place
where rythm slows down
to an even pace
and selfish thoughts
with love are replaced
thats whereyou reach
that sacred place
images notions
equations and such
bombard your whole self
as inner knowing
and such
you will be over come by the spirit
of love
and know without doubting
the messages have come
from heaven above
or wherever you feel
The one holy spirit
of God lives as real
deep in your soul
an angel has sealed
a higher vibration
of love is revealed.
energy we are
and energy is light
and light travels faster
the more we shine bright
the father the son
and the holy spirit
unite
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alicewhite
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2012-04-19 18:16:26]
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Re: Passing the Veil
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by doug on
Thursday, 19th April 2012 @ 09:53:34 PM AEST
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| Yes.. your writing is full of light and energy here. Energy's not an easy thing to capture in writing.. at least not for me. Lovely work , thank you for you comments on mine. Truly , Doug |
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Re: Passing the Veil
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by thehotshotpoet on
Friday, 20th April 2012 @ 10:09:17 AM AEST
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good read thanks for sharing
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Re: Passing the Veil
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th May 2012 @ 12:47:51 AM AEST
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I agree wholeheartedly with what Doug says about your writing being full of light and energy. Your passion, instinct, insight, and feeling is inspiring. You seem to have a seventh sense. Yes seventh because most of us probably have the sixth sense, we may not realize it though. You have something else which I cannot pinpoint....probably just raw talent. I just don't know how to explain myself.
On an amazing scale of 1-100 I would have given this a 110!!!! However, you did ask, I'd just watch the spacing and spelling. But God doesn't care...least I do not think so.
Keep your heart and imagination intact. Your talent is inspiring.
Thank you,
Tim
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Re: Passing the Veil
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 4th August 2015 @ 02:16:48 PM AEST
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| Very interesting write indeed! |
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