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Above The Water
Contributed by
Archie
on
Thursday, 19th April 2012 @ 05:48:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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How far we've come,
from the place where scoffers go
and dreams are broken everyday
How far we've come,
to a place where we are sobered
by the things we hope and pray
I was dying in the water
and I could not pull me out
I was wrestling with my feelings
in a place of fear and doubt
I had floated down the river
like a dead unmoving trout
sinking in the waters of despair
How far we've come,
On a journey never ending
and a place we've never been
How far we've come,
Our head's above the water
but the water still gets in
Do we drown within our troubles
Do we strive to try again
Do we remember the sorrows
Do we help our brother'n
I know not of the morrow
I have hope from deep within
where I excuses fade within an endless sea
I could go on forever
but you know just what I mean
Keep your head above the waters
Don't give up
Continue to dream
Copyright ©
Archie
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2012-04-19 17:48:30]
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Re: Above The Water
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th April 2012 @ 11:20:46 PM AEST
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First of all, welcome back! Glad to see you again.
I especially like this bit:
How far we've come,
to a place where we are sobered
by the things we hope and pray
Yeah, no *****!
I know you said this is a dedication but wow, the category fits it oh so well. You sum it up very well!!!
Buh bye for now,
Tim
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Re: Above The Water
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by shelby on
Saturday, 21st April 2012 @ 12:39:25 AM AEST
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It is nice to see you back Archie.
It is again a delight to read you and Im glad your swimming upstream!!
Hugs you
Michelle |
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Re: Above The Water
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 28th May 2014 @ 01:10:17 PM AEST
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archie this is exquisite! just so beautiful, i love
how you incorporated the water, i just love it!
hugs n' love nessa
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