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a day
Contributed by
thehotshotpoetprincess
on
Thursday, 19th April 2012 @ 05:15:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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A Day
80% of our week goes day by day
we get up to see the sun shining
get ready for a casual day
bus picks us up
bus drops us off
we are surrounded
surrounded by judgement
began walking
get to class
then next class
walks to bus
bus picks up
people screaming 'bout today
bus stops
kids wine
bus continues
bus drops off
we get off
we start walking
and here we are
By:The Hot Shot
Poet's Princess
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thehotshotpoetprincess
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2012-04-19 17:15:48]
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Re: a day
(User Rating: 1 )
by braveheart on
Thursday, 19th April 2012 @ 06:08:06 PM AEST
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| nice stuff girrl! |
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Re: a day
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by gypsymaddness on
Friday, 20th April 2012 @ 12:40:21 PM AEST
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| this poem is realy good. It captures a ordinary, and tiring day. It made me think of a cycle. Good poem :) |
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