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Emerald Waters.
Contributed by
Raggie
on
Thursday, 19th April 2012 @ 11:56:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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Emerald waters haunt my dreams of late.
Ancient oak hold spring deep within their bough.
Dappled sunbeams chalk crystal streams awake.
Young summer winds tease hare and bare hedgerow.
Emerald waters lay my mind at rest.
Heaven sent to heal within verdant rhyme.
Devoured through timid hand I request,
deservedly to reap this life of mine.
This gossamer world oh so easily spun,
from threads natural to an open heart.
Has golden appled oak in autumn sun,
and healing truth to offer from the start.
Such liquid life flowing from heartfelt stream,
draw this slumbering soul from winters dream.
Copyright ©
Raggie
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2012-04-19 11:56:07]
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Re: Emerald Waters.
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by ArtisticIntegrity2012 on
Thursday, 19th April 2012 @ 12:06:16 PM AEST
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Your poem is really a treat,
I enjoyed it an awful lot.
It is a poem that cannot be beat,
I'd like to grow the seeds of its fruit, in a pot. |
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Re: Emerald Waters.
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by dvtpdw on
Thursday, 19th April 2012 @ 12:53:32 PM AEST
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| Your words flow with such a joyous comfort. It hids the pain of the abusive torment, within the gentle guide of your words. Great write. I truly enjoyed it. Thank you so much for sharing this. |
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Re: Emerald Waters.
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by flavellm on
Thursday, 19th April 2012 @ 03:20:19 PM AEST
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| in one word, brilliant. |
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Re: Emerald Waters.
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by doug on
Thursday, 19th April 2012 @ 04:54:48 PM AEST
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| A great opening line. I enjoyed your descriptive sentences. A refuge is priceless. I try to keep mine inside my head , with the help of meditation , so that none can ever touch it. Great work , truly , Doug |
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Re: Emerald Waters.
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by shelby on
Saturday, 21st April 2012 @ 12:37:14 AM AEST
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This sounds like a beautiful place to visit to escape pain. I really do enjoy your poetry.
Michelle |
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Re: Emerald Waters.
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 21st April 2012 @ 03:28:10 AM AEST
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| When your spirit can lightly dance across the words then your soul cries out with the beauty of the poetry. |
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Re: Emerald Waters.
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by deusdeira on
Monday, 30th April 2012 @ 05:28:12 PM AEST
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The last two lines of this poem are majestic to say the least!
"Such liquid life flowing from heartfelt stream,
draw this slumbering soul from winters dream."
I just want to read them over and over!
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Re: Emerald Waters.
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by ShaeBay on
Tuesday, 1st May 2012 @ 07:33:27 PM AEST
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Enjoyable read :) The flow was very soothing and relaxed.
Wonderful!
Shae |
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