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My fear was frozen

Contributed by thehotshotpoet on Wednesday, 18th April 2012 @ 06:06:11 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I've been writing about my kids
overlooking part of my life
somehow I thought I was doing right
I'd forgot about my wife
my daughter ran in & said mom fell
I scrambled through the house
she was unconscious on the floor
as quiet as a mouse
I quickly dropped beside her
I checked her breathing & vital signs
then I called an ambulance
before I lost my mind
she laid there motionless
dispatch said whats she doin this minute
I said not to much shes unconscious
if I had an ambulance she'd be in it
she went to the doctor 2 days ago
when she came home she was crying
she did not stop till 10 that night
the fear was undenying
she never did answer me
her expressions told a story
I may be all that read it
but so far there is no glory
now she's asking to do a living will
that caught me very wrong
I ask why would you need that
she just said I don't have very long
I'm confused with the answers
determination will take pay its price
for the love of my wife
I'll take any sacrifice
the hot shot poet

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Re: My fear was frozen (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 19th April 2012 @ 12:29:37 AM AEST
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Well written and so sad. It is hard to deal with a serious illness of a spouse, I know. I really dont know what to say....

Michelle

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