Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	22-November 05:36:15 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Leader

Contributed by Blackheart on Wednesday, 18th April 2012 @ 10:58:44 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

No one would dare intentionally fall into an abyss
It's common sense
Whereas I would and make heaven out of it
So when someone looks down
And they see the afterlife below the ground
They say, "God is down there?"
I rise from golden darkness and tell 'em, "Nah it's just me here"
First question they ask, "Are you dead?"
Nah man I'm far from that
Then they ask, "If that's Heaven then where's Hell at?"
I say, "Right here...well for you in your case"
Then he gives me that "love...doesn't... compute" robot face
So I start explaining hoping his head doesn't explode in my face

I say long story
I would let you chill at my place
But we don't share the same space
Yeah there's only one abyss
But it's a universe consisting of Heaven and Hell
Starts off as Hell
Eventually alters into Heaven but only time can tell
Father time only takes legal cocaine
And hard work sells
So if you're so if your losses outweighs your profits
And you have the wounds to show you're tenacious
He shows his appreciation
You finally see all the flames go down
And surrounds you with your own kingdom, throne and crown
Anyone can see it but only you can enter and exit
Moral of the story
You go through Hell and survive,
And welcome to Heaven

Copyright © Blackheart ... [ 2012-04-18 10:58:44]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Leader (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 21st April 2012 @ 12:45:41 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I liked this and the end was very good.
I enjoy the twists in this. Such is our life at times.........

Michelle

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com