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The Feeling Swimming gives to me
Contributed by
britvent
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Monday, 16th April 2012 @ 04:02:07 PM in AEST
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Haiku
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Swimming, sweet soothing
Calmness comes collectively
Washing worriness
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2012-04-16 16:02:07]
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Re: The Feeling Swimming gives to me
(User Rating: 1 )
by thehotshotpoetprincess on
Monday, 16th April 2012 @ 07:02:20 PM AEST
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| that was a very short poem |
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Re: The Feeling Swimming gives to me
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by doug on
Tuesday, 17th April 2012 @ 03:39:53 PM AEST
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| I love the Japanese Haiku masters though I don't recall the names of my favorites. Something with a B. Alliteration... something I've read about but had to look up again to make sure I was'nt remembering incorrectly. There is never a more enjoyable poem than one which was crafted by a talented person with a good working knowledge of the craft. This Haiku seems to fit both criteria. Great work. Keep it up , truly , Doug |
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