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On Florida
Contributed by
Faith2012
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Sunday, 15th April 2012 @ 08:53:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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[ On Florida ]
Golden arrows of sunlight pulse through the arms of the old mighty oak The intense rays soothes my body and soul. I recline and inhale the suns glory.
Winged creatures flutter by over head while furry tailed chatterers scamper below. Fresh February air breezes over me . I let go and surrender to the trance. How magnificent to bask in this serene day.
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Re: On Florida
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by thehotshotpoet on
Sunday, 15th April 2012 @ 10:31:05 AM AEST
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I commend you on your poem,I have been here in florida my intire life & I'm sure I'll alway's be here.thanks for the read.
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Re: On Florida
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th April 2012 @ 11:47:13 AM AEST
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Except for a minor typo (unless you meant plural suns) I really like this. Very picturesque.
Thank you,
Tim
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Re: On Florida
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by northernlights on
Monday, 16th April 2012 @ 02:54:52 PM AEST
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| Captured in lovely poetic lines and has left a frozen English woman green with envy! |
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