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A Friendship Fragile
Contributed by
The_Unknown
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Sunday, 15th April 2012 @ 04:44:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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She said she needed space
From her friends
She said she needed time
Away
She said she wanted to grow
To be who she wanted to be, she needed to grow for her own future
She told us all we were great friends
She said, "I wish you well with your futures."
She requested that we respected her wishes
of no communication
She said goodbye
Or so it felt
Goodbye
Dearest friend, goodbye
Please say hello to me again
sometime
But goodbye
Goodbye for now, my sweet
I miss you so
My heart is bruised
And I just want you back
You are too much a part of my life
to just walk away
You're my favorite friend
Goodbye love, goodbye
This is killing me
Come back, soon, please
This can't be a forever-goodbye
It just can't...
Copyright ©
The_Unknown
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2012-04-15 04:44:03]
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Re: A Friendship Fragile
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th April 2012 @ 11:35:49 AM AEST
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I can relate to this one a lot. True, it is sad and it hurts us when someone "needs their space" but alas, we really should respect their wishes. I've had this happen to me hhhh...perhaps, three times over the years. In fact, they're all women (no offense to any woman, but that's how it is). One finally came back into my life. It took about four years though! The others, they just faded into the memories of time.
So sorry you have to go through this but at least it inspired a good poem. Nice writing and chin up.
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Re: A Friendship Fragile
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by northernlights on
Monday, 16th April 2012 @ 02:59:51 PM AEST
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| ouch a scenario that I can also relate well to. Not one you can fight or change just a waiting game that may result in hurt and moving on.Great empathic writing that will bring healing in its recognition to many who read it. |
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Re: A Friendship Fragile
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by thehotshotpoetprincess on
Monday, 16th April 2012 @ 06:56:39 PM AEST
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very excellent well put , I know how it is to have someone that is very close to you and they just walk away ,It is like there is an emptyness in your heart
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Re: A Friendship Fragile
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by SweetGirl on
Tuesday, 15th May 2012 @ 12:13:45 AM AEST
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| awww so sorry to hear that. but dont give up and continue to reach out with your support. |
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