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oceans of pain
Contributed by
relwolf77
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Friday, 13th April 2012 @ 11:31:15 AM in AEST
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SadPoetry
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Hail to far shores of my fears,listen to waves of confusion splash against the rocks of my dispair
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Re: oceans of pain
(User Rating: 1 ) by deusdeira on
Friday, 13th April 2012 @ 04:16:10 PM AEST (User
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The title reminds me of a poem I wrote called "ocean of sorrow." For a one line poem, i enjoyed this very much :) |
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Re: oceans of pain
(User Rating: 1 ) by doug on
Monday, 16th April 2012 @ 12:38:37 PM AEST (User
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Well said for the few words you employed. Perhaps the haiku would be a good medium for you. Nice work , keep writing , doug |
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