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Paper Hearts Were Meant To Burn
Contributed by
fallensilence
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Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 04:35:00 PM in AEST
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im weak, too slow, not dumb, but not smart
this life has succeeded in tearing me apart
a thousand pieces lying lifeless on a bloody floor
paper hearts were meant to burn
broken souls will always yearn
golden lungs were meant to starve
bleeding eyes will never cry
there is always the desire
a sort of burning in my mouth
that is numbed by my mind and hidden in a cloud
im so sensitive that i'm almost numb
i am a single wave in a turbulent ocean
nothing at all.
always ready and willing to fall
there is only winter to look forward to.
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2003-05-07 16:35:00]
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Re: Paper Hearts Were Meant To Burn
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 08:38:42 PM AEST
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| awesome..thats all i can say |
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Re: Paper Hearts Were Meant To Burn
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 03:29:41 AM AEST
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| I love this title ... the feelings are so heartfelt - well written ... Jan |
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Re: Paper Hearts Were Meant To Burn
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by venkat on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 04:42:52 AM AEST
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| title drew me in.. this is so true with so many hearts.. well written.. venkat |
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Re: Paper Hearts Were Meant To Burn
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by tease_whizz on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 05:10:03 AM AEST
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| intriguing, soulful and beautifully expressed. would make good song lyrics i think. Kate x |
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Re: Paper Hearts Were Meant To Burn
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by Metalmouth666 on
Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 10:41:09 PM AEST
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| this is really good, and very deep I enjoyed reading this great write |
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Re: Paper Hearts Were Meant To Burn
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by AmberAmethyst on
Wednesday, 7th September 2011 @ 04:45:26 PM AEST
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| i love it and if you want you can call me dumb but i dont understand the lastline...:( but i love the rest1 :) |
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