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out of reach
Contributed by
elle
on
Thursday, 12th April 2012 @ 06:32:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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the moon cups my face
in her light
there is a sought after tenderness
to the evening
an endless sky
sparkles with half-forgotten distractions
but
I am grounded
in the absence of you
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2012-04-12 06:32:13]
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Re: out of reach
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th April 2012 @ 10:40:13 AM AEST
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Nature poetry, perhaps but the last two lines could also be about love or from/in a love poem.
Consistently beautiful poetry from the poetess known as elle.
Me
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Re: out of reach
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by richard2 on
Thursday, 12th April 2012 @ 07:30:41 PM AEST
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some fine images
excellent thought provoking and lovely
great words
take care
Richard |
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Re: out of reach
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th April 2012 @ 09:35:01 PM AEST
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| Nice. Poetic. Short and sweet |
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Re: out of reach
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by HaroldWilson on
Saturday, 14th April 2012 @ 02:28:03 PM AEST
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| Very neat and concise, with a nice ending. |
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Re: out of reach
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by Breezy on
Wednesday, 25th April 2012 @ 12:25:27 PM AEST
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Oh my heart. Like a one track mind, you
devour my thoughts and regurgitate them
in the most exceptionally poetic way. I so
love that about your poetry!
I can, and do relate ...
~ Breezy
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Re: out of reach
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by ming on
Wednesday, 22nd August 2012 @ 01:04:43 PM AEST
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Longing and nature rolled into one. makes me feel a haiku stir. ;)
ming |
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Re: out of reach
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 17th May 2014 @ 09:18:00 PM AEST
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sadly beautiful, an exquisite write,
hugs n' love nessa |
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