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Forlorn Love
Contributed by
deusdeira
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Thursday, 12th April 2012 @ 06:07:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Like fingers upon ice we slide... in moments where our feelings hide,
we dance around a ruined time... to ease the thoughts within our minds,
with fragile hands we find some peace... a frightened hope of quick relief,
but as we think of all the things... that terrify us in our dreams,
of lost love... and of feelings true...neglected... when we needed soothed,
our fingers slip... the faintest tremble... composure gone... dark thoughts assembled,
berate ourselves for wanting more... eyes cast to ground... the heart feels torn,
we look inside... to break the wall... but always fearing when it falls,
we slip... we slide... we break some bones... and sometimes in the dark alone...
a drop will fall upon the sheets... a sadness that knows no retreat,
engulfed in pain... but in my eyes... you will never... see love die.
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deusdeira
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2012-04-12 06:07:19]
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Re: Forlorn Love
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th April 2012 @ 10:11:48 PM AEST
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Forbidden yet desired, losing control. Love it.
Especially loved this bit:
with fragile hands we find some peace... a frightened hope of quick relief,
Thank you for a very enjoyable read.
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Re: Forlorn Love
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by emystar on
Thursday, 12th April 2012 @ 10:25:54 PM AEST
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Great write, my friend.
Blessings, huggs,
emy |
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