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Desolate Soul
Contributed by
Fragile_Heart_Mortal_Man
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Tuesday, 10th April 2012 @ 07:17:31 PM in AEST
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Once a joy to life, hopeful, full of faith
A desolate soul captured, in darkness, she waits
A petrified girl, blood descending from her face
Forced into silence, can't question the mistakes
A scornful apology, a smirk on lover's face
An agonizing heartache, unable to escape...
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Re: Desolate Soul
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by deusdeira on
Wednesday, 11th April 2012 @ 04:53:11 AM AEST
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Holy crap.... i didn't know so much could be said with such a short poem. Bravo poet... bravo.
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Re: Desolate Soul
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by Raggie on
Wednesday, 18th April 2012 @ 12:01:10 PM AEST
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| Wow:) I have read books that have set out, and failed, to capture the heartache you have so eloquently potrayed in a mere forty one words. Excellent write. Bravo:) |
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