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Contributed by
fallensilence
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Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 02:35:00 PM in AEST
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if you were the pale blue sky
i would admire you all day long
so much that i would write a poem about it
and how i would long to be the perfect ocean to compliment you
a blue so perfect it just fades into
the horizon
but i find that i am crimson
and only the setting sun could ever be my soulmate
i must wait for that precious moment of the day when i am not alone
instead of being able to fade away and rise with you.
how love struck am i?
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 03:40:32 PM AEST
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so very lovely
Shari
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by Firehark on
Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 05:01:59 PM AEST
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| So wonderful. |
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by tease_whizz on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 05:06:47 AM AEST
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| beautiful imagery, lovely balance between colour and content. and yes, you are very lovestruck. i hope you find the sky to your sea :) Kate x |
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