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pain and love
Contributed by
ellewood
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Monday, 9th April 2012 @ 06:15:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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the pain i feel inside
the hurt and anger that lies deep in my soul
sometimes I feel that it is out of control
I need to be free
I just want to be me
I wish people could truly see
I need to escape this life of despair and now I have to repair
my time for happiness will come to me at last
if for once and for all I could escape my past
this I know I could do because of the love that is given freely to me
so thanks for letting me see
Copyright ©
ellewood
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2012-04-09 18:15:43]
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Re: pain and love
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by Byrdie on
Tuesday, 10th April 2012 @ 11:09:52 AM AEST
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| THANKS FOR THE READ.......THIS POEM WOULD BE MOST EFFECTIVE IN A SHAKESPEAREAN SONNET..........IF YOU REWRITE IT, I WOULD LIKE TO READ IT........... |
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Re: pain and love
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by deusdeira on
Wednesday, 11th April 2012 @ 04:54:40 AM AEST
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| lol a sonnet eh... anyways... i thought it was a good write. The past has a way of catching up to us doesn't it? |
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