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Faithful Hearts
Contributed by
jrlatin77
on
Monday, 9th April 2012 @ 05:22:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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With faithful hearts
There’s little fear
Devotions seen
A bit more clear
Then love becomes
The vessel to
A blissful life
For both
of you.
By JRLatin77
Copyright ©
jrlatin77
... [
2012-04-09 17:22:34] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Faithful Hearts
(User Rating: 1 ) by Byrdie on
Tuesday, 10th April 2012 @ 11:18:18 AM AEST (User
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HI..............LOVELY SHORT POEM..........COULD YOU TRY IT IN THE MINUTE FORM (60 SYLLABLES) WITH THE RHYME SCHEME OF
8, 4,4,4; 8, 4,4,4; 8,4,4,4..........OF COURSE YOU WOULD NEED TO ADD THE THIRD VERSE BUT YOUR STRICT IAMBIC METER IS FLAWLESS.
IF YOU TRY THIS, I WOULD LIKE TO READ IT. |
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