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Dead Bodies Everywhere
Contributed by
HIV
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Sunday, 8th April 2012 @ 03:05:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Tell me what you see
tell me what you want me to be
And I'd try my best
but that was never good enough for you
everyday I'm loosing myself to you
HEY!
I seen Hate WHEN!
I was just a little KID!
You want me to be!
A good Girl WHY!
Everytime I'd try!
You'd always decry me!
This is my life....
You've deceived me
but now I know what to believe
don't blame that ___ on me
I can't live that,life.....
You Want Me To Be!
Something I Can Never Ever Be!
You Want Me To Be!
Something I Can Never Ever BE!!.....
Dead bodies everywhere!
Dead bodies everywhere!
Dead bodies everywhere!.
Copyright ©
HIV
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2012-04-08 15:05:27]
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Re: Dead Bodies Everywhere
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by Voice of the Silent on
Sunday, 8th April 2012 @ 03:12:23 PM AEST
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I can really relate to this, I tried my best to be what someone wanted of me but could never be up to their standards. It's best to figure out what you want to do and go with that in my opinion it's not worth the struggle to conform to what someone else wants.
Very emotional write I liked it as a great read
Hope to read more soon
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Re: Dead Bodies Everywhere
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by thehotshotpoet on
Sunday, 8th April 2012 @ 04:59:59 PM AEST
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once again I've gotten to where I fallow looking for your poems & i must tell you there great well honestly the end of the last 2 i got confused on but im thinkin you were pretty uptight as you thought about what you were writing still the same holds true if it's in your heart please keep sharing thanks i love your work
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Re: Dead Bodies Everywhere
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by Lady_Daisy on
Monday, 9th April 2012 @ 05:08:16 AM AEST
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| Isn't this just ripped off from a band? KoRn??? |
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