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becoming me
Contributed by
thehotshotpoet
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Sunday, 8th April 2012 @ 07:29:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
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to become the hot shot poet
I've alway's done my best
to take the time to make the rhyme
the thought's that never rest
trile's & tribulation's
god knows I've seen my share
one thing I do is keep it true
deceivers best beware
I have an awsome family
whom I love so very much
I'd sacrifice & not think twice
just to have there touch
only when inspired
do I seem to do it right
let it be known that these words are my own
I do this with all my might
without my family with me
what I have to say is this
my poems would be filed for a very long while
they may have all been missed
the hot shot poet
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thehotshotpoet
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2012-04-08 07:29:17]
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Re: becoming me
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 8th April 2012 @ 10:51:58 AM AEST
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I find it interesting that every time something happens, as for as some one not following the posting rules, we'll see one or more poems addressing "moderation, moderating, or the moderators". Poems would not be removed or edited; members would not get a slap on the wrist if they'd bother to read the rules before posting. All those words are there for a reason but no one pays attention until they feel, for some reason, they are the exception to the "rule".
The moderators volunteer their own time to help this site and do not get paid.
Keep writing, as you are a poet and have the right to express yourself, but remember, all sites, not just this one, always have those terms of agreement. If someone chooses not to read them, then that choice may possibly come back to nudge them once in a while.
Finally, you may want to use spell check.
There, they're, and their, for example are three entirely different words.
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Re: becoming me
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by Sankha on
Sunday, 8th April 2012 @ 04:11:03 PM AEST
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| Good description of the inner feelings of a poet . |
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