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falling star
Contributed by
thehotshotpoet
on
Friday, 6th April 2012 @ 01:46:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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tonight I saw a falling star,
as it raced across the sky,
& in the greatest curiosity,
I had to wonder why,
why does a falling star,
contain a wish for love,
a lifetime full of happiness,
what dream's are all made of,
do the wishes have a purpose,
when you wish apon that star,
can they change a world of misery,
or even who you are,
even if the answer's no,
if one smile is on a face,
that one smile could mean everything,
& it cannot be replaced,
we all believe in different things,
what falling star's are all made of,
some believe there nothing,
& for some the meaning's love.
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2012-04-06 13:46:47]
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Re: falling star
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by JockPhillips on
Friday, 6th April 2012 @ 01:48:52 PM AEST
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| An inspirational work. One that is good. |
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Re: falling star
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by WilliamButlerSkates on
Friday, 6th April 2012 @ 02:07:15 PM AEST
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| A poem that quenches the soul as ranch quenches the thirst. Stars and ranch and all at home in my soulplace! |
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Re: falling star
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by JCassy on
Saturday, 7th April 2012 @ 12:43:05 PM AEST
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| A falling star does bring a sort of happiness to heart, a feeling of hope for something. Wait for it, and the happiness will come. Very good poem. JCassy |
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