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LONGER THAN
Contributed by
emystar
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Thursday, 5th April 2012 @ 05:48:27 PM in AEST
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LovePoetry
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Till we can no longer see
Planet Earth's beauty,
As life twinkles cross
A raging world
Turns our heart's
Face to face, See
Longer than eternity's garden
Deep deeper than life, its end
Will you still luv me
Longer than eternity's garden?
Deep deeper than life' its end?
As this luv melds and grows stronger
Life lifts our spirits to soar.
Oh darling, lets twinkle at night
In the morning, sing praises 4-vermore.
Who needs chocolate when there is luv?
As hills tremble, loudly sing
Life chimes at the break of day
Our heart's, souls shine and ring.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2012-04-05 17:48:27]
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Re: LONGER THAN
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by thehotshotpoet on
Thursday, 5th April 2012 @ 06:45:27 PM AEST
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inspiring but confusing thank you for sharing
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Re: LONGER THAN
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Thursday, 5th April 2012 @ 09:29:18 PM AEST
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Deeply inspiring Emy. Reminds of St. Paul: to the Corinthians.:
"If I had not love, I count for nothing"
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All other gifts, no matter how worthy, are nothing compared to it.
Let us use our earthly time to nourish it.
Be blessed !
Luv, hugs and Happ;y Easter!
Elizabeth |
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Re: LONGER THAN
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th April 2012 @ 10:30:36 PM AEST
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If I didn't know better
I'd have to shake a stern finger at you two. :p
It is very beautiful writing, you two. Oh and Rob still needs to be our president and you can be his vice-president. I'll vote for yous.
Thanks,
Tim |
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Re: LONGER THAN
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by Robert_Edgar_Burns on
Thursday, 5th April 2012 @ 11:11:14 PM AEST
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A beautiful job Emy. I am indeed honored
to share in co-authorship of these two poems
"Longer Than" and "How Long?" with you.
It is certainly a fun collaboration with a beautiful
artist! Again, I find much happiness in sharing
with one of my favorite people in the world.
Love and Blessings, Rob |
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Re: LONGER THAN
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by CARAAAAA on
Thursday, 5th April 2012 @ 11:45:34 PM AEST
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| great |
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Re: LONGER THAN
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by shelby on
Friday, 6th April 2012 @ 01:36:45 AM AEST
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I enjoyed this. It is so nice to see the two of you write some together. When two super powers collide .... true poetic explosion rocks our worlds ohhhhhhhh yea!
Hugs you both
Michelle |
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Re: LONGER THAN
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by doug on
Monday, 9th April 2012 @ 01:33:40 PM AEST
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| Ahh the conclusion. You two should write more together. You've done justice to the sweet romantic poetry genre. I so often focus on macabre themes that it is refreshing to read something with no air of shadow but only pure love. Keep up the great writing , truly , Doug |
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Re: LONGER THAN
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Tuesday, 2nd October 2012 @ 06:33:25 PM AEST
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emystar what agood job,
excellent.where is the rest.
keep up the good write.
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Re: LONGER THAN
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by colinb on
Sunday, 10th February 2013 @ 11:59:08 AM AEST
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| Beautifully written on a collaborative write |
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