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My boy
Contributed by
thehotshotpoet
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Thursday, 5th April 2012 @ 07:39:12 AM in AEST
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a special little boy
trying so hard to grow
he wants to be like daddy
but if he knew what I know
he is only seven
& trying to move to fast
I tell him take your time son
make your childhood last
one day I gave him wrenches
& he took his bike apart
then he put it back together
ustounding & smart
what more can I say
the pride he holds inside
maybe he's to young
for having so much pride
to be doing things like this
but if we did'nt let him try
we would always be wondering
& asking ourself why
look what we would have missed
the hot shot poet
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Re: My boy
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by Mick_Puttock on
Thursday, 5th April 2012 @ 08:12:32 AM AEST
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| I have always loved poetry about our children, and how they make us all proud. I enjoyed this post very much, thanks for sharing. |
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Re: My boy
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by mvvenkataraman on
Thursday, 5th April 2012 @ 09:37:48 AM AEST
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Dear respected thehotshotpoet,
Your poem tells clearly the truth only
I did not teach my daughter cycling
As she suffers from epilepsy
I made a blunder I now sadly feel
She depends on us for everything
And she feels greatly disappointed
She goes in buses which are crowded
So I take her in my oldest, kind scooter
Your poem is superb, so write more.
With best wishes, Thanking you, Yours truly,
mvvenkataraman |
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