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A father & a dad
Contributed by
thehotshotpoet
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Thursday, 5th April 2012 @ 07:35:55 AM in AEST
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MiscPoems
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Everymorning I open my eye's
I take a deep breath & realize
This house is surrounded by a beautiful haze
The laughter & love that keeps me amazed
My wife & my children are sound asleep
As I protect the heart's of what's mine to keep
I make my way all threw the house
Checking every corner as sleek as a mouse
All is safe & all is well
There dreams & hopes create stories to tell
I love my job of being husband & dad
My prayers all answered & I'm so glad
The Hot Shot Poet
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Re: A father & a dad
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by mvvenkataraman on
Thursday, 5th April 2012 @ 09:43:14 AM AEST
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Dear respected Poet,
A simple, but nice poem to read
Minor errors in the usage of words
Still I could manage reading it
They have not spoiled its beauty
Your poem must be read by all dads
I am happy that you are a great father
Keep it up and make a sweet home.
With best wishes, Thanking you, Yours truly,
mvvenkataraman |
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Re: A father & a dad
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by shelby on
Friday, 6th April 2012 @ 01:42:20 AM AEST
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I can feel the pride coming through this write. I also feel happiness, good work and it is wonderful your life is filled with joy.
Michelle |
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