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HOW LONG?
Contributed by
robert_edgar_burns
on
Thursday, 5th April 2012 @ 01:09:54 AM in AEST
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I will love you oh my darling
Till this poet runs out of rhyme.
Till the stars up in the heavens
Have lost their twinkle and shine.
Till you can walk across the oceans,
And Mount Everest has lost it’s peak.
I shall love you oh my darling,
More than a lamb could love her sheep.
And sweeter than any valentine
Sent with chocolate and much love.
Till all rose petals have lost perfume
And angels call from above.
Longer than all Earth’s chronometers
After loosing all ticks and chimes.
Then on into eternity,
I’ll love you just because you’re mine!
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robert_edgar_burns
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2012-04-05 01:09:54]
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Re: HOW LONG?
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th April 2012 @ 02:34:32 AM AEST
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Okay you two, get a room!!!
I like it and look forward to part two.
Thanks,
Tim |
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Re: HOW LONG?
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by emystar on
Thursday, 5th April 2012 @ 04:17:31 PM AEST
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Tim we don't need a room we just need our minds. smiles.
Awesome write rob. I'm about to post mine.
Smiles, huggs,
#1fan |
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Re: HOW LONG?
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by thehotshotpoet on
Thursday, 5th April 2012 @ 06:54:54 PM AEST
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mr. burns that is beautiful keep up the great work
thanks for sharing
the hot shot poet |
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Re: HOW LONG?
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by doug on
Monday, 9th April 2012 @ 01:27:17 PM AEST
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| Perhaps I'm wrong , I've not seen the movie , but is the picture a reference to said movie From Here to Eternity? I'll have to watch that sometime. Anyways great write. Full of great sentiment and who can resist. Off to read the 2nd now. yours, Doug |
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