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the anger in a 13 year old girl
Contributed by
thehotshotpoet
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Wednesday, 4th April 2012 @ 08:30:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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The hurt in my heart
from encouraged ache
& unappreciate
the darkness I feel
deep in my soul
I carry with me
just like a troll
I share my hurt with the one's
that don't deserve the mold
the emotion so rapid & strong
I cry with fear
of being so cold
this thing that chooses us & abuses us & creeps
hyppocritical to all even to me
we accuse others of abusing
if we could only see
so much hurtful words
& always hurtfull meanings
this feeling has control
not knowing what it's meaning
it creates a war
down deep in my mind
because anger is a demon
& I'm not blind
it causes the spread of hurt
undeserving to the ones we love
this is my reality
of what anger is made of
Ariel Andrews & her dad the hot shot poet
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Re: the anger in a 13 year old girl
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 4th April 2012 @ 08:36:46 PM AEST
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double good.
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emy |
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Re: the anger in a 13 year old girl
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by Bookgoddess on
Wednesday, 4th April 2012 @ 11:19:08 PM AEST
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She sounds so wise. Great write.
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Re: the anger in a 13 year old girl
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by shelby on
Friday, 6th April 2012 @ 01:54:38 AM AEST
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a really good and honest write. It is even more special that the two of you share writing and are doing it together. Nice
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Re: the anger in a 13 year old girl
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by deusdeira on
Friday, 13th April 2012 @ 04:09:41 PM AEST
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| i wish i had someone to share my writing with in life. other than the fine people on this website :) |
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