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Shattered Soul
Contributed by
Shereal_14
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Wednesday, 4th April 2012 @ 08:09:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My world is falling apart
I'd leave here right now if I were smart
I just can't bear us being apart
Think I might die of a broken heart
How can you act like you don't care?
Like i'm not even there?
It's just not fair
While my soul is being laid bare
Before your eyes so you can see
How can you just stop loving me?
Without you, I can not be
Just look at me and you'll believe
When you see the tears washing down my face
A shattered soul can not be erased
The pieces we must chase
Together until we find our place
Together we shall go on
Apart is not where we belong
Without each other we are a mess
Remember that this is just a test
A test to prove that our love can endure
Believe me baby, I am sure
We are destined to be
How can I make you believe?
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Re: Shattered Soul
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 4th April 2012 @ 08:38:54 PM AEST
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Sad but great writing.
Blessings,
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Re: Shattered Soul
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by Robert_Edgar_Burns on
Thursday, 5th April 2012 @ 12:01:05 AM AEST
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You are a talented writer indeed Sheryl.
Remember to "Let God Be True And Every
Man Be A Liar," then no one can let you down.
I know it hurts, and we have all experienced
betrayal of some kind in our lives, and only
time will heal those broken hearts. I thank you
so much for your very sweet comments on my
poetry. Your tender heart shines through.
Love and Blessings, Robert Edgar Burns
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Re: Shattered Soul
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by thehotshotpoet on
Thursday, 5th April 2012 @ 06:59:09 PM AEST
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beautiful words but take it from me the pain never last forever it does get better with time
thank you for sharing
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