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Become the Fire
Contributed by
deusdeira
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Wednesday, 4th April 2012 @ 06:58:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Floating in the pouring rain...it cannot bring her down,
she walks upon cascading rain... and wears it like a gown,
She lives within the burning sun and radiates its warmth,
upon a cloudy sky she walks... her pathway made of thorns,
when she walks through forest glade... a whisper starts to form,
the trees begin to sing her song... true beauty so forlorn,
Upon the crest of waves she walks... to revel in their wake,
and when she's gone... the oceans cry... and the earth begins to quake,
the heart forgets its loyal beat... whenever she draws near,
she looks into the hearts of men... for which she sheds a tear,
it breaks upon the barren ground... a tempest starts to grow,
a sadness in her deep blue eyes... her heart begins to glow...
She jumps into the raging storm... and dances deep within,
don't look back.... she says to me... just let the storm begin,
looking deep... i saw her there... glowing like a spark,
and when i tried to pull her free... she fled into the dark,
and when i jumped into the black... i found her world inside,
so far away from everything... a place where lovers hide,
and so the storm began anew... with fire and with rain,
she danced in light... she danced in dark... and said they were the same,
a spark within the hottest flames... she burns like true desire,
For you can never catch a flame... you must become the fire.
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2012-04-04 18:58:46]
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Re: Become the Fire
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 4th April 2012 @ 07:38:45 PM AEST
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Beautiful.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: Become the Fire
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by shereal_14 on
Wednesday, 4th April 2012 @ 09:01:37 PM AEST
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| Wow! Just wow! That was amazing! Wish I could write as beautiful as you...mine is usually dark, or sad. Amazing write! Keep em' coming!!! |
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Re: Become the Fire
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by thehotshotpoet on
Thursday, 5th April 2012 @ 07:04:28 PM AEST
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extremely well worded love the rythem keep up the good work
the hot shot poet |
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