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My new perception
Contributed by
samermaged95
on
Wednesday, 4th April 2012 @ 02:20:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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One day i stopped walking
And I asked my self one thing
Will my nightmare keeps stalking
Or do my life have to create a wing
Cuz my sorrow just keeps talking
And I just ignore it and sing
I sing a song of blocking
that loneliness is an endless string
A string of lies and deceiving
A string of beliefs based on deception
Believes that I can stop grieving
Believes that my life could be an exception
But know my misery that I'm not leaving
Until I put you down and start a new inception
So no matter how hard you are i will stop bothering and heaving
And that no interception can stop my new perception .......
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2012-04-04 14:20:04]
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Re: My new perception
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by ShaeBay on
Wednesday, 4th April 2012 @ 02:31:54 PM AEST
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| I enjoy this. The inner mind can be a deceiving place. Twisting and turning. Sometimes it's easy to get lost. Very well written :) |
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Re: My new perception
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by Bookgoddess on
Wednesday, 4th April 2012 @ 04:20:52 PM AEST
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| The first part confused me a little at first. LOL. I kept reading, though. Im glad I did. This is a good write. |
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Re: My new perception
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by emystar on
Monday, 30th April 2012 @ 05:59:43 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Great writing.
Blessings,
emy |
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