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Lonely
Contributed by
Shyness
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Wednesday, 4th April 2012 @ 01:02:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I feel such sorrow deep down in me,
I am so lonely yet no one can see,
I want the things I can never find,
Someone who will love me and be kind,
I want someone here to hold me when I'm sad,
Yet will not make me feel like ***** when they're mad,
I want someone who will listen and care,
About all the things I never share,
Why is it so hard now for me to smile,
And why does everything have to feel like a trial,
Like the right choice was there all along,
Yet I never think of it till it's already gone,
I hate this loneliness that has taken over my soul,
Some days it just feels like a gaping hole,
How can people live a happy life this way,
I wanna talk about it but what would I say,
Hey there wanna talk about what I'm going through,
I'm just kidding I'm fine (right if you only knew),
Copyright ©
Shyness
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2012-04-04 13:02:51]
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Re: Lonely
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by dvtpdw on
Wednesday, 4th April 2012 @ 01:06:05 PM AEST
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| I hear what you're saying through your words. It's my world. You put into words my hidden pain. Great write. Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: Lonely
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by Bookgoddess on
Wednesday, 4th April 2012 @ 05:18:49 PM AEST
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I've been to that place, too. I still have some of it left in me. Just keep writing, you're letting it out and that is good. Great write.
Here if you are in need,
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Re: Lonely
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by mvvenkataraman on
Thursday, 5th April 2012 @ 10:05:15 AM AEST
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Dear respected Shyness,
You wrote so painfully giving tears
Then suddenly changed everything
So you are damn fine in life really
May God bless you with peace
Coming to your poetic ability
Your write wonderfully dear
Your ideas are nicely given
You have a great poetic brain.
With best wishes, Thanking you, Yours truly,
mvvenkataraman |
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