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Reflections at Bathtime
Contributed by
taffimai
on
Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 07:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Languishing In the echo of a splash
I thrash around for some hope on a rope
Trying to wash off the fear that drowns me
Comfort eluding confoundingly
Despair gripping, breath ripping
Lungs in crisis, thinking what ifs
Tears added to mix of bubbles and foam
Dead weight troubles amid enamel and chrome
Knowing not what to think, I start to sink
Then, Buoyed up again by unexpected discovery
Finding within the means of recovery
A trickle of thought so to speak
It’s source unknown, a welcome leak
It tells of strength in letting faith flow
So fear despair and worry may go
Down the plug unable to do harm
The body left wrapped in a towel hug so warm
The soul regains its inner peace
Doubts and qualms have been released
Copyright ©
taffimai
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2003-05-07 07:05:00]
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Re: Reflections at Bathtime
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 07:28:08 AM AEST
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Loved this......
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Re: Reflections at Bathtime
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 07:36:29 AM AEST
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*decides to go have a soak* lol
this is a great write:) hugs nessa |
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Re: Reflections at Bathtime
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 08:38:26 AM AEST
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very good write...
shari |
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Re: Reflections at Bathtime
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by starkindler on
Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 07:12:06 PM AEST
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Really good....Loved the line "Buoyed up again by unexpected discovery." Good idea.
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Re: Reflections at Bathtime
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 03:54:17 AM AEST
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| Great poem ... enjoyed this very much! ... Jan |
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Re: Reflections at Bathtime
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by EyesRustedShut on
Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 05:54:02 PM AEST
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| Wow... it sounds as if you really love a good bath... nice... If you like good music and you have some extra time check out the music of Monday In London at www.mondayinlondon.com |
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