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Suffocate or Hide
Contributed by
HIV
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Sunday, 1st April 2012 @ 02:34:46 PM in AEST
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This place I would like to find
A place where I could hide
But I never noticed, It Was Inside My Mind!
The place inside my brain
Now holding all my pain
I don't know my chances, What If I Should Die!....
DEEPER AND DEEPER AND DEEPER
INTO THE BACK OF MY MIND!
GOING THROUGH THE PAGES OF MY LOST REALITY!
ONLY IF I COULD FIND AWAY!
TO DROWN THEM FROM MY MIND!!
NEXT TIME I LOOK BETWEEN THE LINES!!!!.....
I can't breath,I can't breath
where is there to hide
I can't breath,I can't breath
where is there to hide...
I can't see,I can't see
I'm going blind
I can't see,I can't see
I'm going BLIND!...
This place inside my mind
A place I like to hide
You don't know the chances
What If I Should Die!
I don't know my chances....
i'm so blind.
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HIV
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2012-04-01 14:34:46]
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Re: Suffocate or Hide
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by deusdeira on
Monday, 2nd April 2012 @ 06:29:03 PM AEST
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| panic and desperation erratically captured. bravo. |
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Re: Suffocate or Hide
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by ShaeBay on
Wednesday, 4th April 2012 @ 01:56:16 PM AEST
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| The emotions were captured very well in your writing. Very nice. |
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