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Locked up let me be free

Contributed by sarahmoon on Saturday, 31st March 2012 @ 03:09:37 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



‎"Im locked up yet Im free, Im locked up, locked up inside of me..I can walk, swim or fly wherever I wanna go but its my mind, my brain and thoughts that tell me no... I wanna break out of here, Im ready, break out of me...Break out of my head and finally feel free... I wanna look over my shoulder and see the bars the bars that kept me down, I wanna see them dissapear and look again and be proud of my scars... My scars from the past make me who I am today and the days that ll come and go...Its time to step out the cage and walk outside, pick up a feather and blow...Blow hard, harder till it flies away and never comes back... Dear past you are on that feather now far away, far away to stay stay there and dont return... Im free now, Im free .... I can finally be me ... No need to look back and look for you because you have flown away, away to stay...." Written by Sarah-moon, Moi




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Re: Locked up let me be free (User Rating: 1 )
by ammar on Monday, 2nd April 2012 @ 08:51:52 AM AEST
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It's a fine poem on freedom, one of the few poems I have truly enjoyed in this format.

Great write...you have enabled your thoughts to unleash and attain freedom.


Re: Locked up let me be free (User Rating: 1 )
by thehotshotpoet on Thursday, 5th April 2012 @ 07:41:18 PM AEST
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from your past you can never be free only in thoughts thanks for sharing




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