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Sun
Contributed by
banjosandwitch
on
Friday, 30th March 2012 @ 07:02:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Sun
Sitting in the hot sun
Feeling the heat in my neck
Watching the people stroll around town
Sunglasses on feeling fine
It is only March and it is hot as hell
This could be a start of a beautiful season
Or just a freak heat wave before the onslaught of dull days
Sun, please stay for a while
It makes us feel all bright and positive
Giving us a rosy glow
Sitting in a suntrap zone
Children playing, adults content
Sunny days are welcome here
Spreading radiant joy
Sun time, fun time, break out the barbecue time
By banjosandwitch 27/03/12
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banjosandwitch
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2012-03-30 07:02:47]
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Re: Sun
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by thehotshotpoet on
Friday, 30th March 2012 @ 08:09:55 AM AEST
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| good start wish it was longer though thank you for sharing |
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Re: Sun
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by Kailas on
Friday, 30th March 2012 @ 08:41:01 PM AEST
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| very nice, keep on writing :) |
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