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TIME TRAVELER'S ADVENTURES #15

Contributed by robert_edgar_burns on Thursday, 29th March 2012 @ 06:56:30 AM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

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(A BIBLICAL BASED SERIES)

My very last adventure
Was still quite fresh in my mind.
I'd never gone two days in a row,
And my machine was working fine.

I thought it time to give it a try
To test it's home built quality.
The blueprints I used were simply great.
I wondered who left them for me.

The key now in the ignition.
The throttle was now in my hand.
I took my foot off the brake,
And I'm off to a long ago land.

The sign at town's end said Bethlehem.
This place was no mystery to me.
I saw the star we sing about.
The night was just so serene.

I heard the cry of a baby.
People were gathered about.
I saw a beautiful young mother,
And I felt a need to shout.

But I held my tongue while people kneeled
I found I was on my knees too.
I heard a voice saying "This is My Son,
Now what are you going to do?"

"I said I'm going to tell others
When I get back to my own time."
The voice replied "that's what you should do,
And you should do it all the time!"

So here I am doing that right now,
Bringing this message of hope to you.
You can decide what to do with this story.
Now tell me what will you do?

Copyright Â© robert_edgar_burns ... [ 2012-03-29 06:56:30]
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Re: TIME TRAVELER'S ADVENTURES #15 (User Rating: 1 )
by alicewhite on Friday, 28th February 2020 @ 11:54:31 PM AEST
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Try and stop eating sugar
And write like a ceo
Live up to my signature
Sign of the times
Like you

Love how you tell a tale or two,
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