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My kind of day
Contributed by
nluchett
on
Wednesday, 28th March 2012 @ 02:01:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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This is my kind of day,
Wind whips across the land,
Legs scurry over the blades,
Which fight to keep upright,
But eventually cooperate and flow in synch.
This is my kind of day.
Pedals flutter through the sky,
Reach the ground only to ascend up above
The warmth graces my face,
Cooled down by the passing breeze,
Combination perfect, threshold met.
This is my kind of day.
Early spring and my body needs its rest,
A day to ease my mind, slow down,
Appreciate the energy within creation,
Notice the spirit that flows up and down my soul,
The same spirit soaring through nature,
This spirit of love.
This is my kind of day.
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nluchett
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2012-03-28 14:01:26]
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Re: My kind of day
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by dvtpdw on
Thursday, 29th March 2012 @ 08:30:48 AM AEST
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| Your words carry such a uplifting message. I greatly enjoyed the flow, and the meaning you convey. Great write. Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: My kind of day
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by Breezy on
Tuesday, 3rd April 2012 @ 01:10:27 PM AEST
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whoa! That's MY kind of day too!!
Beautiful words that caress the reader while reading, just as the sun,
wind and blades do in this sweet write. Makes me long for summer so badly.
This is one of those pieces, that I wish I could jump into and run barefoot through.
Thank you for this. Totally calming .
~ Breezy
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