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Broken Wing
Contributed by
BabyJewels94
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Tuesday, 27th March 2012 @ 02:36:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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he holds it very carefully
deep within his heart
he has so much he wants to say
but doesn't know where to start
he wants to try to mend his love
like a broken wing
because it is so beautiful
like roses in the spring
so he takes that first step
with persistence and with care
but since this is so sudden
she can only stop and stare
this breaks his heart
but he understands
the love he thought was in his heart
was only in his hands
he tried to mend that broken wing
but only made it worse
and now his heart is broken
and laying in a hearse
he held it very safely
tucked away inside
but since he never let it out
the love he had just died.
Julie Andrews
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2012-03-27 14:36:07]
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Re: Broken Wing
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by richard2 on
Tuesday, 27th March 2012 @ 02:50:13 PM AEST
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As someone who held his feeling inside for years
until i learned to let them out, this writing resonates with me. A fine expression of sensitivity and its effect on love.
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Re: Broken Wing
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by Blackheart on
Wednesday, 28th March 2012 @ 01:28:34 PM AEST
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| I understand what its like to hold things inside and never having released it - it hurts a lot. That's why I love this poem |
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Re: Broken Wing
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by thehotshotpoet on
Wednesday, 4th April 2012 @ 08:52:15 PM AEST
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really enjoyed reading this poem even if it is my daughter
very good write keep up the good work |
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Re: Broken Wing
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 8th April 2012 @ 02:52:56 PM AEST
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Sadly beautiful and beautifully sad. Nicely done.
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Tim |
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