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It's Gonna Go Away?
Contributed by
HIV
on
Saturday, 24th March 2012 @ 11:56:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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I'm always hiding
Locked away in this dark room
A place where all my memories fly around inside
It never goes away
I Need Somebody Tonight
Somebody To Say
It's Gonna Go Away!
That your pain will fade!
No longer feel your hate!
It's gonna go away...
It's like I'm trapped inside some box
But there's no key for the lock
I feel there's nothing but a hole
Where my hearts supposed to go
It's something you just can't stitch and sow
It never goes away...
I Need Somebody Tonight
Somebody To Say
It's Gonna Go Away!
That your pain will fade!
No longer feel your hate!
It's gonna go away.
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HIV
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2012-03-24 11:56:05]
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Re: It's Gonna Go Away?
(User Rating: 1 )
by Luzinha on
Saturday, 24th March 2012 @ 09:12:35 PM AEST
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| I hope it is going to go away! I like the poem, it clearly conveys the feelings it's trying to express... I think it could be elaborated a bit more though |
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Re: It's Gonna Go Away?
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by HIV on
Sunday, 25th March 2012 @ 11:30:35 AM AEST
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| sorry guys I meant to hit emotional for the type of poem my bad. |
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