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This is Ridiculous
Contributed by
voice of the silent
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Wednesday, 21st March 2012 @ 10:20:56 PM in AEST
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This is ridiculous,
Why do we put up with this?
Everyday life drone on until the end
How would we survive without our friends?
But why do we persist
Why do we insist?
On continuing our pursuit of happiness
What's the point it all ends in darkness
I've lost my light
I've lost my will to fight
So to me this is ridiculous
Fighting against the overwhelming tide
It will wear us all down eventually on the inside
Why do you do this to us life?
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voice of the silent
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2012-03-21 22:20:56]
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Re: This is Ridiculous
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 21st March 2012 @ 10:34:37 PM AEST
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So sad but beautiful writing.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: This is Ridiculous
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by Kira-KILL-xx on
Thursday, 22nd March 2012 @ 03:01:02 AM AEST
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| Good poetry, I must admit, sometimes I feel like this. Thank you for putting my locked away thoughts into poetry without even knowing me!:) |
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Re: This is Ridiculous
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd March 2012 @ 04:36:13 PM AEST
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| I sometimes feel like this too... nice poem |
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