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the art of waiting. . .
Contributed by
elle
on
Tuesday, 20th March 2012 @ 04:57:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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within
& without
we must suspend duality
no other anticipation
calms every cell
every minute vibration
& does this bring us peace?
no
but it allows us
me. . . you. . . them. . . we. . .
revives us
illuminates the necessary void
& somehow
sometime
at once
we arrive. . .
in splendor
at the door
peace beckons
to us
enter. . .
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2012-03-20 04:57:29]
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Re: the art of waiting. . .
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th March 2012 @ 09:59:49 AM AEST
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This leaves this reader wanting more. He sits here and is now "waiting" to see what happens next...after the enter.
Waits for the sequel in anticipation. :) |
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Re: the art of waiting. . .
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by Bookgoddess on
Wednesday, 21st March 2012 @ 12:07:30 AM AEST
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| I'm with Tim on this one. I don't think I've ever written in this style but, you rocked it. |
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Re: the art of waiting. . .
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by Butterat_Zool on
Friday, 23rd March 2012 @ 07:08:16 PM AEST
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| I would say that it seems the first two commenters missed the mark -- that the entering is the destination, not what's beyond it. However, the best I can do is say that this reminds me of the LOST finale. |
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Re: the art of waiting. . .
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th March 2012 @ 11:34:16 PM AEST
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Then I read it again and comes forth a whole new meaning.  |
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