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Torn apartLike a butcher knife thru a butterflys wings
Contributed by
Wastedwhitetrash
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Monday, 19th March 2012 @ 10:07:58 PM in AEST
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I cannot describe how i feel, a love that could never be real. You dont mind meeting at my place?but say life with me is just a waste...
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Re: Torn apartLike a butcher knife thru a butterflys wings
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by Wastedwhitetrash on
Monday, 19th March 2012 @ 10:14:00 PM AEST
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| Sorry its so short lol |
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Re: Torn apartLike a butcher knife thru a butterflys wings
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by Wastedwhitetrash on
Tuesday, 20th March 2012 @ 06:01:01 AM AEST
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| Sorry its so short lol |
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Re: Torn apartLike a butcher knife thru a butterflys wings
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by JohnnyFallen on
Tuesday, 20th March 2012 @ 05:56:48 PM AEST
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| It's short, but the last thing that you said actually makes me shake. "Youd stay at my place? but say life with me would be a waste" (I think that's how you typed it) sounds heart breaking. Short, but I think it's deep. |
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Re: Torn apartLike a butcher knife thru a butterflys wings
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by Luzinha on
Saturday, 24th March 2012 @ 05:50:21 PM AEST
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| I really liked it! Short but conveying a lot of feelings.... it's great that you could condense so much meaning in a few simple words.... chapeau |
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